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Vexations

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Vexations

There are many things to which I'm averse

   I know the Commandment says not to curse

      So to stifle my tongue

         From bad words bein' flung

            I'll fix vexations flingin' rocks at a hearse!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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  1. Date: 6/6/2013 1:07:00 AM
    I try not to make a habit out of swearing... it irritates me when people swear with no feeling and no purpose (they aren't meant to flavor your conversation... lol). But besides the point... this was funny stuff! I'm not sure if this what you intended or not, but are you implying that the person that angered you is now dead?

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 4:16:00 AM
    Nice way to let off steam, Mr. Robert...my problem seems to be that I throw rocks at the hearse AND utter obsenities at the same time...any advice?...Clever and funny limerick sir - Tim

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 11:43:00 AM
    nice poem robert

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:14:00 AM
    ha! you've provided a much-needed smile this morning, bob! thank you!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 1:27:00 AM
    Hi Robert always a pleasure to drop by and read your work, loved this limerick very funny, have a great weekend sir, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:17:00 PM
    another chuckle from you Robert and thanks its needed xx

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 12:38:00 PM
    That's a funny Limerick, that certainly makes sense.

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 11:56:00 AM
    Love it Robert! - I need to learn to write Limerick, fun to read. - Have a relaxed and pleasant weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 11:56:00 AM
    Ha ha, what a tremendous write my friend! You have masterfully written a dynamic poem here with an awesome Limerick! I loved reading your magnificent piece, such a lovely poem, Great Work!!