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  1. Date: 9/28/2013 1:04:00 PM
    I like how you said,, in poetry I speak my mind.. and YET not so sure... David, I hope you are well.... deep, love the ending On my face a paper mask... <---- wow!!! missing you.. Hope you are well?? sending soup mail...TEX

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:22:00 PM
    Congrats, David. Outstanding write. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:50:00 PM
    Congratulations, enjoyed your poem :)

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:37:00 PM
    Congrats on your win - JH

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:25:00 PM
    If we're a secret club, I'm in it too, for noes I say congrats to you!

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:14:00 PM
    Oh David, if I were near you on your death bed, I'd put a pretty rose in your cask, and a kiss underneath the mask, congrats on your win xxx

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:58:00 AM
    Im sure i read this.lovely post..but geee i didn t leave a comment..I love it Dave and I love your sprinkled humour all the way.

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:57:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your winning spot David xx

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:18:00 AM
    witty and fun, much enjoyed!

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:35:00 AM
    A very great story in a poem.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 9:06:00 PM
    well penneed David...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:47:00 PM
    I love the verse, of life... David.. CONGRATULATIONS, with this awesome poem about YOU :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 9:44:00 AM
    Don't you know it? Definitely a poet who springs a thought to rhyme and gives rhythm to a rhyme. Always a pleasure to come and read, your clever words have filled my need. :)

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 12:09:00 PM
    I know the hesitation in the first few lines first-hand. "What do you do? Well (long pause) I'm an artist, a painter to be exact." Most often, as you no doubt know, the reply is, "That's nice." I needn't say to keep writing; it's clear that you will. J

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 11:15:00 PM
    dear friend David..what an awesome sharing..very amazing and lovely <3 and yes you are a great POET <3 nice to read your brilliant writes <3 Sk

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:20:00 AM
    As we say here in the States...You're poet and don't know it...Oh yes David...You're a poet, so know it, grow it and then show it!...Have a wonderful and inspired Sunday my friend and keep that pen handy but PLEASE, no paper on the face, okay? (or at least punch out those little eye-holes so you can see where you're going) - Tim

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson
    Date: 2/24/2013 6:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well, I guess if you're dead it doesn't really matter. Never mind...
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:31:00 AM
    this is really heartfelt, David. I know exactly how you feel. I find myself in the same quandary. The ending was sad yet funny. A paper mask on the face? haha. What an image. pen in hand!! Loved the read.

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 2:21:00 PM
    David,very nice eye opening write...And I thought I was the only one who paused when I said "A Poet." Ha,ha...I really liked the pen and paper mask closing. Thoughts of a true poet... :o)

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:52:00 PM
    love this one, David

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 11:44:00 AM
    WOW!!! FOR SURE!! One of your best my Friend.. you should be very proud of this ONE!! To my Favs