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haiku 3



February blues-

the hem of my jeans

now in slush





*another try at verbless haiku

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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 4:39:00 PM

    You most definitely have my attention with this verbless Haiku. I went and looked at my attempts of Haiku, and there were verbs, in some cases a few in one piece! Beyond Crafty, witty, etc...I've read more of your writes than I've commented on; you AMAZE me. There's not another CYNDI in this room; I'm sure of that. Take care!

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 2:58:00 PM

    cool! nice poem and that's neat that it is verbless, what a challenge! ~soup mail~

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:53:00 PM

    A verbless Haiku?...Wow Cyndi, sounds very challanging and from my perspective, you nailed it!..Being from Bayou Country I can't imagine Feb. in Canada...Down here?... Cold, windy, and humid...chills my brittle bones - Tim