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Group Effort

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Group Effort

Midgeted paws gently experiment 
with the silken whiskers of their maternal dynamo
  
Dabbling with the conscious but succumbing 
softly to the confetti of uninhibited dreams

Rejoicing in a triangle of togetherness  
Basking in the periwinkles of space and time
 
Under a backdrop of light and optimism
   Enjoying the nuances of peace and temperance 
  
Their unified thoughts epitomize one harmony
Each sending a message, don't ever leave me.

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  1. Date: 3/28/2013 9:21:00 PM
    Congratulations, with your winning poem Karl , I'm also stopping by to say hi, and wish you an early Happy Easter, just in case I don't have time to stop by in the next few days. take care and have yourself a good one~ Always & Forever *LINDA"

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 5:18:00 PM
    Karl, , a nice winning poem, Congrats~SKAT

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 5:17:00 PM
    Beautiful writing Karl. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 5:16:00 PM
    Congrats on your win..Donna

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:02:00 AM
    Karl, lovely words painting the picture and sensory experience of those little kittens, congratulations on your win. PS, I like the title and how you show it.

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 1:00:00 AM
    My hearty congratulations on your 3nd place win in my contest my dear friend Karl! I extremely love and enjoyed your amazing poem. Thank you so much for your full support. Have a blessed Palm Sunday/Weekend! love and hugs, Leonora