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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:36:00 AM
    So beautifully penned Yasmin

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 10:25:00 PM
    sweet yasmin..this is so lovely .sweet and beautiful.. i really enjoyed so much :) thank you dearest friend <3 <3 <3 luv and hugs <3 Suku

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:25:00 AM
    You Inspire!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:41:00 AM
    this is a beauty, Yasmin. Gail should love it and I enjoyed how you used rispetto form for it! I have a movie to review but was having trouble getting onto FB!!!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:26:00 AM
    Great imagery in this poem!Very nice use of the form.

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:35:00 PM
    This is just beautiful. I could just picture it. Thanks for sharing and God bless You. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:33:00 AM
    My dear you made me become one with the rain and at the same time you purify my soul! Marvelous verse!

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 3:33:00 PM
    Oh yes...Let it rain, let it rain down on sweet, fragrant Jasmine! (and me too) 'The earth lets out a sigh'...perfect line in a flawless poem - Tim

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 8:08:00 AM
    This is how I write a Rispettos, you can write them in the format of abababcc, but I don't care for that format as much as the ababccdd! There is one small thing I would like to point out, the second line has 12 syllables instead of the required 11 syllables! Just a small thing my friend! You might use, "Holds my head in a shower, cooling slowly" just an idea! You have written everything so masterfully though my friend, I was amazed at how perfect this write is! This is a Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 8:00:00 AM
    Quite a nature-feely. I can project into this one. YOur usual fine stuff, yasmin

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:41:00 AM
    Lovely poem and sweet kisses in the rain, Yasmin. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a really relaxed weekend, take care of tired legs ... :)) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:14:00 AM
    Love the descriptive in this poem-- I feel the kiss of rain, refreshing and reviving as I read this.