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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:30:00 AM

    Wow, this is profound... a couple of things that stood out: "I sit before a screen exposing truths in me for everyone to review and dissect".... "put words into good use send a strong message to those who mentally and physically abuse." Writing can be a instrument in many ways... this poem is amazing!

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton Date: 2/28/2013 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Becca I'm glad you enjoyed reading fox in the fable.... stuff like this comes 2 me everyday I never make corrections though I'm sure I should; I just figure why not write of things that are real naked truths so to speak regardless of the feedback its what gives each writer it's individuality intentions Thank you so much - Maddie
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 2:05:00 PM

    I enjoyed your verse this afternoon. Light & Love

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton Date: 2/27/2013 11:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much ma'am I appreciate your feedback warmest wishes -Maddie :)
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:29:00 PM

    A Great expression of thought...and interesting!

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton Date: 2/27/2013 1:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for commenting on my poetry.
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 3:12:00 PM

    I see you are doing well with Greek mythology. A very powerful monologue that provokes the mind and raises questions. Well written! Of course, God hears all and feels all. This is what I wrote yesterday: SNOWFLAKES Snowflakes: Tears of angels Crystallized by the Agony of human Pain! Thank you for visiting!

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton Date: 2/21/2013 5:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you again my friend I've read a few of your poems tonight and I gotta say you truly are a great poet God Bless