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Haiku 16

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Haiku 16

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The air near the eyes,
the fragrance of eyelashes.
Red words of the heart.

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:41:00 PM
    'stunning imagery with the red words!!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 2/27/2013 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "Heart" came first, then a blood image. I'm a visual person in the main, so I see the words most of the time as I write them.
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 1:16:00 PM
    Soooo sweet, Jack !!!! Well done. - Have a pleasant day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 2/21/2013 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks1 Maybe it should have been for Valentine's day? J