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Space

Floating free in this sparkling constellation Spirit unburdened in celestial creation. The heavens open their arms, embrace me I am balanced to perfection, gravity free. Needing my own space in time Breathing easy, feeling sublime. As I gaze into the stars, kiss their eyes They shine on me with a wisdom so wise. Hear my thoughts out loud, freedom's voice A voice of reason, a soundless rejoice. Breathing space is emancipation The Milky way, a galactic fascination. As Higgs Boson captures my imagination I float, intrigued, feeling need for exploration. Mind over matter, in chimerical culmination. Free, unfettered, an unhindered liberation.
21/02/2013 For Black Eyed.

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  1. Date: 3/5/2013 3:59:00 PM

    congrats Yasmin ....Seren

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:41:00 AM

    Congrats on your win sweetie xx

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:47:00 AM

    Yasmin, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:27:00 AM

    gives a feeling of freedom. Immense freedom.

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:23:00 AM

    I have read a few of your poems and I have to say you are the master of your emotions and the steward of your senses. Your work is a fascination, a dream come to life. I enjoyed your work very much and I have become a true fan.

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 9:34:00 AM

    Your fine poem reminds me - many, many Years ago - of my dad and I sitting out in the back yard looking up at the stars. As a child, I was taken out of body into the limitless. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 8:09:00 AM

    This is so beautifully composed, my dear Yasmin! "As I gaze into the stars, kiss their eyes"... visual, poetic, brilliant! Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 8:06:00 AM

    ooo sounds nice... I'd love to float there too, unburdened... wonderful poem Yasmin, I enjoyed reading this!

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:24:00 AM

    You followed the same pattern of eeffgghh, except for at the beginning where you went aabbbccdd, three rhymes is a row, was that intentional? I just thought I'd bring that up to you! I love it, I think it made your write even more creative, a masterful poem indeed! I loved reading this delightful piece this morning, what a fun poem, Great Work!!

    khan Avatar yasmin khan Date: 2/21/2013 10:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    wrote it off the cuff, then found out it all rhymed..lol
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 12:16:00 AM

    AWEsome... dearest Yasmin...really enjoyed your beautiful poem <3 ..:) luv and hugs <3 Suku