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  1. Date: 3/5/2013 3:59:00 PM
    congrats Yasmin ....Seren

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:41:00 AM
    Congrats on your win sweetie xx

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:47:00 AM
    Yasmin, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:27:00 AM
    gives a feeling of freedom. Immense freedom.

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:23:00 AM
    I have read a few of your poems and I have to say you are the master of your emotions and the steward of your senses. Your work is a fascination, a dream come to life. I enjoyed your work very much and I have become a true fan.

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 9:34:00 AM
    Your fine poem reminds me - many, many Years ago - of my dad and I sitting out in the back yard looking up at the stars. As a child, I was taken out of body into the limitless. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 8:09:00 AM
    This is so beautifully composed, my dear Yasmin! "As I gaze into the stars, kiss their eyes"... visual, poetic, brilliant! Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:24:00 AM
    You followed the same pattern of eeffgghh, except for at the beginning where you went aabbbccdd, three rhymes is a row, was that intentional? I just thought I'd bring that up to you! I love it, I think it made your write even more creative, a masterful poem indeed! I loved reading this delightful piece this morning, what a fun poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 12:16:00 AM
    AWEsome... dearest Yasmin...really enjoyed your beautiful poem <3 ..:) luv and hugs <3 Suku