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Rattling away

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Rattling away

She came in. 
She had my undivided attention. 
When she looked I turned away. 
So I sat there, with the pot boiling and lid just rattling away.

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  1. Date: 2/20/2013 9:51:00 PM

    Oooh. Tense. I really like this. Awesomely expressed!Always,Laura