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STYLE

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STYLE

what I like about you
is the indifference which penetrates me as deeply
as contaminated nitrogen air

my skin is filled with cries
and every scream grows a wing
my hair is like a crown tree
flowering cherry

I fly
I learn to feel the air on the
unexpected height of me

you don’t see me
even if I belly dance

you see through me
simple

remembering
non-existence

I detach every night
from unripe lips
to one last poem which I
dedicate to you
but the words
remain untouched
not saying my name

and I wait...

any answer is like new breathing
because I don’t breathe
I refuse to breathe
till you respond to me

I breathe deeply
in time with the 360 Grades

I walk on the Tropic of Cancer
equilibrium on a plan of seduction

I would throw you
to catch me 
and your hands like your lips
are not found in this space and time

I love your style.

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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 5:52:00 PM

    Outstanding, Daniela. Well done. Congrats. hugs, Ralph

    VOICU Avatar DANIELA VOICU Date: 2/28/2013 11:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much, Ralph!
  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:36:00 AM

    And I love your style!

    VOICU Avatar DANIELA VOICU Date: 2/28/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much,Michael!
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:09:00 PM

    Daniela,, an excellent poem, for my contest CONGRATULATIONS :-) Goodnight~ PD

    VOICU Avatar DANIELA VOICU Date: 2/27/2013 10:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! Good night!