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Kiss the Rain

I'm leaving now, but here is a reminder
'Twill bring to you the days we walked through rain
So when you wish to feel my hand in yours
Or stroke your dripping hair-- Then kiss the rain

Though leaving now, I wish I could be with you
So when you feel o'erwhelmed with grief or pain
And long for my caress upon your face,
The rain will touch instead-- So kiss the rain

Whenever you have tho'ts of this sad parting
And salty tears your lovely cheeks do stain
To feel the tears for you I'll surely have
Do this, and I will too-- Go kiss the rain

Whenever you are longing for my presence
And times that we went strolling down the lane
I'll whisper soft endearments on the breeze
So heed the sighing wind-- And kiss the rain

If ever you should pine to hear me speaking
The thunder might burst forth with glorious main*
While drops that fall are sure to be my tears,
To feel them wet your skin-- Just kiss the rain



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  1. Date: 3/2/2013 2:25:00 PM

    Congratulations Isaiah, on your well deserved first place win with this beautiful entry. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:41:00 PM

    Isaiah. This is beautifully touching. Wonderful write. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Huggs deb

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:00:00 PM

    I love this, Isaiah! Congratulations on a very fine and deserving Ist Place win! Well done! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 4:18:00 AM

    Congrats on your sweet victory Isaiah :)

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:34:00 PM

    I KNEW this would be a winner!! Big congrats on your 1st place win!

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:13:00 PM

    good win~PD

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:54:00 PM

    This is beautiful, touching and great writing. I am transported to an old love. Jennifer

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on a great win.

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:35:00 PM

    Congratulations !! This is just soooo full of romance !! I like the idea of the whisper on the breeze !!

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:04:00 PM

    Congrats Isaiah on your big win, loved this poem from the very start, not surprised it made it to the top, xxx Rose

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 6:00:00 PM

    Isaiah---words of magic here---I can't add to that except to say I am so glad I read this today and this is into my favs.

    cornish Avatar craig cornish Date: 2/27/2013 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Isaiah, you are, you have, that gift of thought and word, that at some time will be discovered by someone greater than we.
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 3:14:00 PM

    Fav verse three! Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:51:00 PM

    Beautifully written Isalah. Best wishes in the contest, Connie

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 1:21:00 PM

    I hope this beauty will.get a win in the contest..Its so romantic and beautiful.You re fr definitely.mused.One for my favs- Charma

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:45:00 AM

    I hope you know that you are making all the women swoon with this one! Seriously though, you have painted some very sweet images here. Wonderful job :)

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 10:22:00 PM

    Very nicely done for that contest!! Soft and romantic just the way the title inspires a poem like this one.

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 6:55:00 PM

    Isaiah this is one of my fav from you, a melting moments happened as I read this, what can I say, I love the rain, xxx

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 2:34:00 PM

    Ahhh!! I like the romantic feel to this one..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the review..I am still thinking about my work "Journey"..I haven't decided exactly which way to go with it..Should it be a living poem or a death poem..Sara