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Beauty

                                                  The sky dreary
                                       I guess some would call it scary
                                              I think it's beautiful 
                                                    In its own way
                                         Watching the light fade away
                                           Empty tree branches sway
                                                 Whispering to stay
                                                       Cold chill 
                                                      Sits so still 
                                           There's a peace in the cold
                                                   Standing there
                                                  Watching it hold
                                               It doesn't lack beauty
                                                   If you truly see
                                                The beauty gleams
                                                    In everything

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  1. Date: 5/15/2013 3:59:00 AM

    Lovely poem written here...great message that I get out of it.

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil Date: 5/15/2013 8:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! I'm so glad! :)
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 4:00:00 PM

    a very nice and simple poem. Caleah, i love the sky as it fades away. thank you for the sweet thoughts of seeing the beauty in all the things around... i will call the image you are adoring epically beautiful... xox~ Lindakeva

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil Date: 5/13/2013 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aww, thank you! Most of my family pretty much hates when it's rainy or dreary. So I decided to write a poem about how beautiful it can be if you just really look at it. :D
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 10:24:00 AM

    It's all in your perspective. I like how you try to find the beauty in things that most would call "scary" or "unattractive". There's a Twilight Zone episode I watched called The Eye of the Beholder... really makes you think! Beautiful poem...

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil Date: 5/12/2013 1:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :O I saw that episode! (The old Twilight Zone is way better) Yeah, I usually like to look at it all from different angles. What may look scary can actually be beautiful if you just open your eyes to see it.
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 10:36:00 AM

    Good one. Caleah, yes, beauty could be a decision and lies in the eye of the beholder, they say.

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil Date: 4/16/2013 4:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! That saying is so true!