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Battlefield

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Battlefield

Spindle time as sowing illusions
Drowning in a sea of images
The measures that raise life seconds
Human is the animate doll who conquered the presence

Life from the past back to the present
From the present for the future
Turnover outlined by destiny
Like an hourglass that acts as a reciprocal measure of the time

The limitations are things of beauty
When the end of a round will be on relief
As the satisfied thirst
As the favor of all the sacrifices

Life in all parts come with the name of love
A form that presents a mirage
A perfect fundamental when you touch
It was part of a mortal but drunk when you shed

Small leaps present the flowers of aesthetic
A conclusion atop of provisions that you can reaped
I will not give up in any of those circumstances
My life is still in the front line of this battlefield

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:39:00 PM
    YANNY, this is a nice winning poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) always~ PD

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/16/2013 11:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda, it's always been a pleasure to have a visit by you :D, wishing you a great day :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 4:52:00 PM
    Hey Yanny, I enjoyed your thoughtful and original piece. Congrats! -Jeremy

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/15/2013 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jeremy :D glad that you enjoyed :D wishing you a great day there :D. Hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 4:32:00 PM
    Yanny, interesting portrayal of your life, sad that you face challenges but a very creative use of the words. Congratulations!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/15/2013 6:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Sheri, thank you for the congrats :D, wishing you a great day :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 2:10:00 PM
    This is a good write. You followed the theme well. Congrats on making the winners list !! Enjoyed the read, especially like the last two stanza's.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/15/2013 6:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debra, I love them too :) , we are all still struggle with our live, aren't we? :D wishing you a lovely day there :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 7:03:00 AM
    Great write, Yanny! Congratulations on your win! Ruben.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/15/2013 6:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ruben, wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 6:59:00 AM
    Ya my congratulation on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/15/2013 6:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Connie, glad to have your visit :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 4:16:00 PM
    amazingly beautiful, and a sheer joy to read

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/8/2013 4:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Harry, glad to see you around :D wishing you a great day there :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:35:00 PM
    A very beautiful poem Yanny. Thanks for sharing with us. Lucilla

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/27/2013 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lucii, missing you here :) wishing you a lovely day there :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:19:00 PM
    Hi Yanny, how are you today my Sunny friend??

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/25/2013 5:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lovely as always Rick :D wishing you a lovely afternoon too :) - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 11:18:00 AM
    This is extremely beautiful poem my dear friend Yanny. I'm so glad to read it tonight. I love each and every line in this poem especially the fourth part. A winning masterpiece for me! I'm so sorry if I've few time to read your work and others here but I'll promise to come back and read more because it's already late here. Good luck and best wishes always! love and hugs, Leonora

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/21/2013 6:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Leonora, take your time :) what is the sorry for? You already brighten up my day by your lovely words :D wishing you a wonderful day :) - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 10:37:00 PM
    Yanny, I admire you for taking the challenge of this poetry contest. I found it too difficult but you were able to come up with a brilliant idea!! Good luck in the contest!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/21/2013 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea, before I'm pretty not confident with this, but your words really encouraged me a lot :) thank you for making my day too :D wishing you a wonderful day Andrea - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 6:34:00 PM
    A powerful message comes across you poem, never lose hope, good luck in the contest Yanny and thank you for your kind visit, xxx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/21/2013 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Rose, your present make my day :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 6:22:00 PM
    very nice Yanny, it should do well. Have a great day!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/21/2013 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I made few changes especially in hourglass verse, pretty not confident with it before, but now finally I'm going with that new verse, hopefully it still fit the content :), have a great day too :) - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 2:47:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by to congrats me on a win..Sara

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/21/2013 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara, happy to see you around and a pleasure to read yours too :)