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Haiku 33

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Haiku 33


                                                       giant sycamore
                                             branches reaching to heaven --
                                                        a shady haven


          2/19/2013

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  1. Date: 6/21/2013 9:58:00 AM
    Beautiful image on giant sycamore, the top branches with leaves makes a hanging shady space you called it shady heaven. Well done. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 11:26:00 AM
    Kim you write beautiful Haiku's! I once gave feedback to a writer who asked for critical feedback, I said that although I loved the write he called it a Haiku and there was nothing of nature in it. He was not polite afterwards, lol. Wonderfully written!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:46:00 PM
    Beautiful visual Kim. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 11:24:00 AM
    I would love to see one of these trees. Nice haiku Kim. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 10:43:00 AM
    That's where I have my glider.... so relaxing in the spring and summer. Lovely haiku !!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:41:00 AM
    You make this place sound so inviting Kim, I think we all want to take a seat on your sycamore tree, thank you for your kind visit my page, sending my love and peace xxx

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 5:40:00 PM
    I think that I shall never see a poem as lovely as a tree!! Was that how it went? This reminds me of that. Also of the new movie Safe Haven that I just saw. you would love that romantic movie.

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 6:11:00 AM
    Very good descriptive work..I can just see the scene..Those are such beautiful trees which grow to massive size if allowed the room..They do creative yard work though with the leaves, balls, and bark..Thanks for stopping by..Your reviews are always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 7:46:00 PM
    A true haiku! A rare find.

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 10:01:00 AM
    lovely, kim!