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About This Poem

Ellen's Blues

Reverse Nonet

Please
show me
what is love,
show me the way
to a yearning heart
before this feeling dies
fades in to oblivion,
I believe in love just show me
please show me the way to Ellen’s heart!

© Harry J Horsman 2013

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  1. Humphries Artist Avatar
    Steve Humphries Artist
    Date: 2/25/2013 3:38:00 AM
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    Really like the structure, good to see someone chasing love with such emotion!
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 2/23/2013 1:46:00 AM
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    Hi Harry impressive words my friend loved it, have a great weekend my friend, all the best Owen
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    Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 2/22/2013 11:05:00 AM
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    This is a nice poem with true feelings. I heard once that - love is never having to say - I'm sorry. Thanks for sharing and for reading The Game of Life. Lucilla
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    Joseph May
    Date: 2/21/2013 7:47:00 PM
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    nicely penned Harry....thanks for stopping by...
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    Caleb Smith
    Date: 2/21/2013 2:00:00 PM
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    Very cool, Harry.....might have to try one of those.
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 2/21/2013 10:26:00 AM
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    Harry; I love this; the flow and especially the end. Enjoyed this. Hope you are doing good ;)
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    bl devnath
    Date: 2/21/2013 9:51:00 AM
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    Your Ellen can never deny because after she comes to know, she will fall in love without doubt. Nice heart touchable one. Loved always, bl
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    Jack Ellison
    Date: 2/21/2013 6:25:00 AM
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    Good one Harry... will Ellen be seeing this? If she does, she will be over the moon!
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/21/2013 5:11:00 AM
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    I am sure Ellen's heart will open for you harry if she is real, and she will be bowled over by this. xx
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    Dan Kearley
    Date: 2/21/2013 2:34:00 AM
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    This is very touching Harry...I'm sure she would love this.And thanks for the comment on my two grey hairs of wisdom..Brought me a :o)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/20/2013 10:45:00 PM
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    very sweet and who is Ellen? She must be a lucky lady!!! I enjoyed seeing a new poem from you today, especially one as nice as this nonet.
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    John Loving III
    Date: 2/20/2013 7:39:00 PM
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    Tell her. And if she doesn't crush you proceed to step 2.
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/20/2013 1:41:00 PM
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    This poem is a great start *lol* Good luck my friend. I like the new photo. Mine is like my haircut it never changes.
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    Annalise Brigham
    Date: 2/20/2013 1:13:00 PM
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    This little gem is one way, Harry. Make sure she reads it!! Good to see you took a break. Take care, my friend! Always, Annalise
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    Eileen Ghali
    Date: 2/20/2013 9:26:00 AM
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    Lovely, Harry! Simply superb!
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    Cynthia Alvez
    Date: 2/20/2013 9:22:00 AM
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    Ah! Divine ... Send this verse with roses...I say. Cynthia
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    Donna Jones
    Date: 2/20/2013 7:35:00 AM
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    Lovely...sincerity is usually the key...loved the poem harry
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    Becca Lucas
    Date: 2/20/2013 6:37:00 AM
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    Harry, it's so good to see you here, working your magic... I hope you find your way...


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