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Bernard Colasurdo
Date: 5/10/2013 8:51:00 AM
Becca you always steal my heart with your words...what a beautiful feeling this poem gave me. You are so talented, i really have to spend the time to go through all your poems...I just cant keep up lol. Bless you my beautiful friend.
Richard D Seal
Date: 3/20/2013 8:10:00 PM
You do write beautifully Becca, this is another fine example, and always with a message. Having a good day thank you, hope you are. Take care, Regards Richard. ps, dunno what your going to make of my latest post
Heather Ober
Date: 3/4/2013 8:22:00 AM
SO sweet!! "You're the music to my soul's tranquil song" - that is a stunning line.
frank herrera
Date: 3/3/2013 11:22:00 PM
I 'm BETTING The Man in the MOON, SANDMAN...and one more...would love to watch you... as you slumber...Oh so ten der ly
Tim Ryerson
Date: 2/23/2013 7:34:00 PM
Okay, three deep breaths like you said... here we go...Nope, no good Becca...still sweating bullets and my heart is still racing...whatever shall I do?... Some kinda lucky guy you got there!...Sorry my moth poem creeped you out (he was just a misguided and harmless little fella) - Tim
harry horsman
Date: 2/23/2013 8:04:00 AM
3,285 breaths a year for you, no problem, with poetry like this, one could die happily...
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2013 10:26:00 AM
What happened to your last name????
Dan Kearley
Date: 2/21/2013 10:22:00 PM
Yes!!!! That's all you need to do... I love this write. :o) I thank you for stopping by...So happy you enjoyed that poem.
Kanour Med
Date: 2/21/2013 3:47:00 AM
This is such a chanting and charming poem... Keep it up
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/20/2013 10:59:00 PM
this is very interesting!! Love how you calculated the number of them at the end!!
S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 2/20/2013 3:43:00 PM
It is amazing how with every breath, love fills you in with fresh energy!! Jag
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/20/2013 10:49:00 AM
Again you take my breath away, reading your poetry I am now behind by several breathes per year.
GG JJ
Date: 2/20/2013 10:16:00 AM
Hey Becca, when I read, I can just add : Air, source of the life, where world began - That's for all people we're sharing - Maybe if I close my eyes, dreaming - Come to me a breath, left by a lovely woman. - Excellent poème, encore une fois. Your invisible friend, sorry for my bad English.
Russell Sivey
Date: 2/20/2013 6:59:00 AM
That's a whole lot of breaths that you would take for him, a very sweet sentiment my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What an amazing piece, quite the beautiful poem, Great Work!!