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Red or White

I like red she likes white
I understand her feeling
She understands mine.

Cheese and Vintage wine
A rush of adrenaline  
I am onto a hot night. 

Tomorrow again… 
We never complain
I am onto a hot night again!

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  1. Date: 2/20/2013 4:23:00 PM

    Happy poem, happy poet, and one very happy reader, and enjoyed, thank you..

    hammoud Avatar ali hammoud Date: 2/21/2013 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 2:12:00 PM

    ‡ Sounds Like Solomon And His Many Wives, My Dear Friend ˜ Except I Do Not Imagine That He Had Or Was Afforded The Luxury Of Stepping From Night Unto Night, Rather, Hour Unto Hour, LOL, Poor Guy, No Wonder He Lost His Mind ˜ Smile, This A Very Well Written As Cool Poe; Kudos, And, Thank Your Precious Heart For Your Kind Visit ˜ Love Always, Rachel *

    hammoud Avatar ali hammoud Date: 2/20/2013 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Have you heard of king Solomon's ring? Anyways that is a good concept to write about, may be I will give it a try sometime. Thank you for stopping by, Love Ali
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 9:35:00 AM

    :) Glad you are on to something good there!

    hammoud Avatar ali hammoud Date: 2/20/2013 2:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sometimes it's good to imagine, and think of the future hehe. Tks love, Ali
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 8:57:00 AM

    One can always dream! :D Cute poem, Ali, makes me smile... :)

    hammoud Avatar ali hammoud Date: 2/20/2013 2:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sweet Becca, thank you for visiting. Keep your profile picture I like it a lot! xoxox
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 5:44:00 AM

    So it will be ........ nice poem Ali. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    hammoud Avatar ali hammoud Date: 2/20/2013 5:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wishful thinking my dear Anne ;) It'll have to wait until Easter break I'm afraid :S hehe thanks for your comment, Lov, Ali