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KISS THE RAIN


The years have flown & we’ve grown old 
Hand upon your heart a timeless story told
Two bodies dancing in the downpour  
Trembling arms our bodies flushed ashore 

Nostalgic thoughts revamp as I crouch still      
Raindrops falling hard round the paper mill   
Memories of our laughter on a bleacher seat  
Naked and soaked my heart is your entreat   

Unhinged in rain I let you cradle me at arms     
Divested of restraint and heavy laden garms
Swollen lips kisses in the rain a red sun rise 
Wild beneath a velvet sky, I find your eyes 

I never could forget our tumultuous matinee 
Your moist wet kisses and your love's array 

February 19, 2013
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  1. Date: 3/25/2013 4:40:00 AM

    wow! Beautiful poem. I feel so in it.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 2:32:00 PM

    Congratulations Rose, on your third place win with this wonderful poem. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 4:20:00 AM

    A deserving win Rose :) Congrats :)

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 12:09:00 AM

    congratulations on your win dear Mystic mysterious rose that fragrances the soup..

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:14:00 PM

    Mystic, congratulations in Gail's "Kiss The Rain" contest. always~ PD

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:01:00 PM

    Awesome lover poem. I like it! Jennifer

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 5:45:00 PM

    congrats on your win Rose

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 6:46:00 AM

    Beautifully told with love!

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 9:07:00 PM

    Beautifully written thanks for sharing!!!

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 6:29:00 PM

    This is magic.

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 10:05:00 PM

    wow, a romantic sonnet after Shakespeare's own heart!! I know Gail will love it. I loved the imagery of it.

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:57:00 PM

    This is a gorgeous way to express reverence for love Mystic - i love your unique moments, your unique song - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 9:51:00 AM

    Romantic indeed! Great write, Mystic Rose...thanks for your lovely comments and encouraging words. It brightens my day! Hugs, Eileen

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 7:53:00 AM

    Anyone who hasn't danced in the rain is missing something indeed! Wonderful poem

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 7:48:00 PM

    This is a tenderhearted write, a beautiful write my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!