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I Tried To Say

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I Tried To Say







                                   On a cloud I wrote - I love you
                                       But the cloud blew away
                                    On a tree I wrote - I love you
                                  But someone cut down the tree
                          In the sand on the beach I wrote - I love you
                                 But the waves wiped them away
                                 In the wind, I cried - I love you
                      But the wind was too strong and no one could hear
                               In a small letter I wrote - I love you
                             But I never posted it - it was never sent
                                      But you know - I love you
                                    and my heart belongs to you




19.02.2013
A-L Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 4/14/2014 9:07:00 AM

    I love this ! Beautiful and reminds me of a couple I saw on the beach the other day writing I Love You in the sand.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/14/2014 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ... so sweet couple :) - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Cindy.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 9:20:00 AM

    Excellent. Soft, gentle, easy. We all can relate.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/30/2013 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Joey.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 5:45:00 PM

    Well I'm looking for one of yours I haven' read " older ones" have a great day Anne- Lise ;} <3

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/6/2013 1:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Debbie.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 4:31:00 AM

    Awww beautiful, makes me believe in love again.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/15/2013 4:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Mafata. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 12:59:00 PM

    Powerful and beautiful words. Really lovely

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/8/2013 1:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Terry-Ann. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/16/2013 12:23:00 PM

    I love that, I feel that way a lot, with what ever I say, no matter what I do people don't hear me, not unless I put it in a poem, them everyone seems to want to help

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/16/2013 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Danielle. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 2:02:00 AM

    Oh, this is awesome Anne ;} going to fav's xo's to you ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/2/2013 2:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/26/2013 9:48:00 AM

    Beautiful sweet poetry here, WHO needs a big gesture to tell them What they know is true. Keep writing

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2013 10:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Joanna. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 4:08:00 AM

    Time honoured theme, but so originally and candidly delivered. Delightful :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2013 4:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Maggie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:38:00 AM

    Love the honesty and simplicity in this one... sometimes it's hard to say what we really feel inside but the ones that really matter to you will feel the love regardless... those moments of silence can say a lot!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2013 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, it's true. - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 10:59:00 AM

    Due to lack of communication, message may not be sent but reality is reality, never dies. Wonderfully done. Thanks always, my friend. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/6/2013 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:22:00 PM

    Beautifully written poem! Your friend.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/25/2013 2:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Carol. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 10:31:00 PM

    AWEsome...this is superb...very beautiful dear Anne Lise:) <3 <3 <3 and so romantic <3 :) hugs !!! Sk

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/25/2013 2:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    -Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sukmawati. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 6:19:00 AM

    A lovely poem to read this evening, Anne Lise, the words are clearly written in your heart. Thanks. (^_^)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/23/2013 6:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    -Thanks for your comments and your visit, Noel. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 3:22:00 AM

    Annilise.. I love this. You have captured how missed moments may lead to contemplation of missed opportunities to express ourselves. The last line says it all though. Thank-you for encouraging me with your comments-- it gives me the confidence I need as a new poetrysoup member to carry on posting my pieces. More so, coming from a talented member like yourself.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/23/2013 3:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    -Thanks for your comments and your visit, Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 8:15:00 PM

    Simply put, this is a beautiful gem you'e written, Anne Lise! I love it! Love, Annalise

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/23/2013 2:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Annalise. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 11:40:00 AM

    Anne Lise just trying to catch up as have not been here in a while, this one is just beautiful, I love it...David

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2013 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, David. - Always welcome. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 3:43:00 AM

    On a cloud I wrote I love you. But the cloud blew away. On a tree I wrote I love you. Behind the leaves words say. In the sand I wrote I love you. To the laughing tides. In the wind I love you. Silent though loudly I cried. A note that says I love you I leave for you to find. But you know that I love you. And the love you read is mine.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2013 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ..... SWEET ! - Thanks for your comments and your visit, T.S. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
    Situation Avatar The Situation Date: 2/22/2013 3:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Permission to collaborate?
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:24:00 AM

    Hi Anne L:ise beautiful words of love well written by you, all the best Owen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2013 2:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Owen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:40:00 PM

    beautiful write Anne....best wishes...love

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2013 2:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Joseph. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 6:07:00 PM

    Oh, post it, send it, Anne-Lise. Scream at the top of your lung, my friend. Lol. Let it be known! :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2013 2:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Toquyen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:15:00 PM

    What a lovely poem, brief yet impactful.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2013 2:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 3:43:00 PM

    You almost brought me to tears with this one....So much love! But never heard or seen.Though love is always felt I believe. :o) Going to the Fav file... f.e.f. oxox

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2013 2:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Dan. - oxox / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 1:42:00 PM

    Unique work that you have written..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/21/2013 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Sara. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 10:38:00 AM

    You said it perfectly Anne Lise, was a joy to read this gem of yours xxx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/21/2013 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Wilma. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 11:25:00 PM

    Sometimes it just in the knowing without telling. You just know in your heart. Beautifully written..xx Holly Moore..Soup Mail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/21/2013 2:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Holly. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 10:21:00 PM

    anne lise, this is adorable. I love the clever way you included aspects of nature too. Great little poem.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/21/2013 2:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Andrea. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 8:03:00 PM

    What a sweet poem! I probably never would have thought of it. Love endures despite what may conflict with it.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/21/2013 2:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Isaiah. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 4:28:00 PM

    and you say it so well Anne Lise, and you have found the true source of your love, and no one can take that away,, beautiful poetry..

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/21/2013 2:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Harry. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 2:07:00 PM

    You made something permanent from your affection Anne, despite erosions of environment - thats sweet - J.A.B. %

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/20/2013 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - - Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Justin. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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