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About This Poem

Life from Her and Him


We met          We met
We talk          You talk
We Ate           I ate
We walk        We walk
We kiss          We snog
Hold Hands   Hold hands
Blue eyes        Great Boobs
My home       Your home?
My bed          Her bed
I sleep            I don’t
We meet        We meet
We eat          We eat
We walk       Great boobs
Your home     Woo-hoo
Make love      Have sex
He’s big         She’s hot
Woo-hoo        In  love
Move in         Tidy up
A child          Oh God
Buy house      Sell car
More kids       Get job
Kids grow      Thank god
Kids leave      Woo-Hoo
Make love      Nice boobs
In love          In love

© 19/2/2013

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  1. Dicychael Avatar
    Scunder Dicychael
    Date: 3/27/2013 7:56:00 PM
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    Wow... Love this one.
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    Eileen Ghali
    Date: 3/25/2013 7:16:00 AM
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    I found this very very true to life...especially the repetitive point of interest for men!!!! ;) However...sad to say towards the end the adjective changes from GREAT to NICE! ;)
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    Bernard Colasurdo
    Date: 3/19/2013 5:55:00 PM
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    that's a very cool write David, I loved it!!! Had FUN reading it.
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    delysia hendricks
    Date: 3/17/2013 7:00:00 AM
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    lol. A very entertaining write, David. The layout in itself adds volumes. Well done, my friend :)
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    Rebecca Larkin
    Date: 3/8/2013 7:05:00 PM
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    Interesting write. really good. I Like it a lot. --Becca
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    Lillie Williams
    Date: 3/3/2013 6:02:00 PM
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    What a wonderful mind you have. This made me smile. I suppose every parent look to the days when their kids finally can grow up and leave home. This is also a awesome way that it is written. I love it. Thanks for sharing.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 3/3/2013 4:11:00 PM
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    hahaha. HEre is a really clever he Said she said kind of poem. I love reading one like this,David.
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    Sukmawati Komala
    Date: 2/26/2013 9:49:00 AM
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    this is so cute and amazing :) you bring a smile on my lips :) awesome sharing ..thanks dear poet David :) <3 Sk
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 2/24/2013 6:23:00 AM
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    I know I can always get a smile from your work my friend... Michael
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    Christopher Allen Wallach
    Date: 2/23/2013 12:03:00 PM
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    cool poem i like the creativity with this one
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    Becca Lucas
    Date: 2/22/2013 2:16:00 PM
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    ha ha This is so clever and cute, I love it!! :) favs
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    daver austin
    Date: 2/22/2013 7:52:00 AM
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    I'm glad love survived after the shotgun wedding. Great idea and layout. Love, daver
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 2/22/2013 2:13:00 AM
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    Hi David wonderful gave me a smile thanks for that, all the best Owen Soupmail
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    Caleb Smith
    Date: 2/21/2013 1:57:00 PM
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    Haaaa...this is too funny David, and a pleasure to read................nice boobs
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 2/21/2013 10:23:00 AM
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    hehe David, just what the doctor ordered ;) hope you are keeping warm over there! Tc Wilma
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/21/2013 9:15:00 AM
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    ha ha love this one David, suits you my friend xx
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    Anne Currin
    Date: 2/20/2013 3:33:00 PM
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    Hahaha! David, this is priceless! Boobs, boobs, boobs- typical thoughts of a male. ;) I love this, I am going to add it to my favorites. Thanks for sharing this awesome write that brightened my day!
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    Izzy Foxx
    Date: 2/20/2013 2:10:00 PM
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    wonderful...i am a teenager, but ive been told enough to understand this. thank you for sharing more wisdom -izzy
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    harry horsman
    Date: 2/20/2013 5:08:00 AM
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    a little different David, and just love this, could be life's mission statement..
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 2/19/2013 8:21:00 PM
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    Ha ha, this is a tremendously wonderful write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful and ever amazing poem here this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
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    Donna Jones
    Date: 2/19/2013 6:45:00 PM
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    Whatever this is its wonderful and fun to read....
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    HOLLY MOORE
    Date: 2/19/2013 5:08:00 PM
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    Ha! What the heck is snogging? If it's anything like the rest of the poem, I want to try it. Sounds like you enjoyed yourself and so did she!......xx Holly Moore
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    ilene bauer
    Date: 2/19/2013 3:15:00 PM
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    so clever, david! love it!
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    john loving iii
    Date: 2/19/2013 10:09:00 AM
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    Boobs must be new.
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    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/19/2013 8:53:00 AM
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    I love this life cycle especially the ending and the way love survives..lovely


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