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True Finds

In love am I with a great deal of things
Of wonders on earth, of darker shadowy background
Of artists, of ghouls, of nature’s fools
Of genius soaked in all matter of internal sound
Who knows what cradles these concepts, what lies beneath the admiration
—the reality
The minute…disappointment—it is naught
There it is not until the light hits the bay
Every single detail displayed
And oh, how my judgment is frayed!
By your unfathomable beauteous words, by images I receive so absurd
I imagine lives untold—I fantasize a fib
And make out with it—TRUTH, with darkened veneration
Baffling me, filtering me with joy and mysterious longing
As if by heaven the song sung is from below
Rested on the meadows of our minds
And in our hearts
True…treasurable….finds…

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 9:38:00 AM
    thank you for your dropping by dear sweet friend Laura... am stopping here to enjoy your lovely poem so well written and beautiful..i do really enjoyed this much .. <3 all the best dearest one <3 Sk

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:29:00 AM
    True finds are the treasures that we find when we are not looking. and are able to hang on to them. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:17:00 PM
    You can find a lot of good or bad things wherever you search. Good descriptive write.

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 10:01:00 PM
    "Rested on the meadows of our minds." Beauteous! :o) (Like the new pic)

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 2/21/2013 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Dan! <3 ~Laura
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:49:00 PM
    I know that your are one of my great findings Laura - your light has traversed my 'bay' for sure - so nice to read a write which thanks Life for all the possibilities - keep fantasizing my friend - 'As if by Heaven the song sung is from below, rested on the meadows of of our minds, and in our hearts...' I repeat this beautiful expression from respect - J.A.B. %

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 2/20/2013 9:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aw, thanks Justin. . .I will - so glad to share my work with you and read yours as well. ~Laura
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 6:40:00 PM
    Laura, this a very insightful description of cognition and perception, and it is a very enjoyable read. You are quite a talent. I find it interesting that the truth of the perception or vision can sometimes be a disappointment. That is-if even the present view can be trusted. But what you describe is such fun--I hope I can enjoy it all for a while longer. I do wish you well, and I thank you for this treasure.

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 2/20/2013 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much, Duke! I am so glad you enjoyed. ~Laura
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 9:39:00 PM
    Beautifully writen.

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 2/20/2013 9:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you John, for the support. I deeply appreciate it. ~Laura