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I Made A Wish - A Waltz Wave

A
shooting
star
fell from
the sky. I
closed my
eyes
and made
a wish. I
wished for true love
to find me,
embrace
me,
own me.
Wonder of
wonders
my
wish came
true.

2/18/2013

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  1. Date: 3/24/2013 2:46:00 PM

    this is fantastic , Kim!! a lovely little poem. I see you have not posted so many lately. Hope to see a lot more from you.

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:57:00 PM

    I like that your waltz wave had a happy ending.... so far my wish is yet to be granted...ever hopeful. I like this form..thanks for the introduction to it !!

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 2:09:00 PM

    Your wish came true, I am so happy for you! Excellent! High marks!

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 12:19:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your work today..Very creative way to go with the topic..Thanks for stopping by..Your review was very uplifting.Sara

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 8:47:00 PM

    Some times dreams do come true, Kim! Enjoy your week! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 5:30:00 PM

    Lucky you

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 5:09:00 PM

    delightful write Kim....best wishes