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STEPS

R E J E C T I O N 
                       the first
                                  step 
                                       on the 
                                                slow 
                                                      descent
                                                                 into
                                                                       H E L L 


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  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:04:00 AM

    You have done an awesome job with this form!! This IS how it feels when we're faced with rejection.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/19/2013 8:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, my dear! Thanks for the visit! :)
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 5:54:00 PM

    Well I see EJECT there and parts left over....lol. hope this is just a poem

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/19/2013 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What a lovely insight, Donna! :) Eject the offender, and don't worry about rejection!
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 4:30:00 PM

    I can see how this is true, creative way of exposing this demotion love xxx Hopefully your climbing the stairs up, joyously, with the help of the angels and their seraphic intervention xxx

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/19/2013 8:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes...I do a lot of climbing...up and down! Unfortunatley, it is the rhythm of my life! I've written a poem on it. Hugs!
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 4:15:00 PM

    Success begins with failure.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/19/2013 8:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, it surely does!