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Moonlight Serenade

Blindfolded, he takes me from the car through the humid air of August. He holds my hand, and then surrounds me with his arms, when small obstacles appear. He brushes the hair from my forehead, gentling me like a shy colt. The silk rectangular scarf, I had folded and tied about my breasts clings to me. My cutoffs ride up further exciting me, as he lifts me onto a wall. Shushing me, he says. “Sit still, honey.” I have no idea where we are but, his voice and footsteps have a slight echo.

the wail 
of a harmonica --
moonlight serenade

Vibrations tingle across my skin, raising the down on my arms. A bead of sweat mixes with baby lotion and follows a shiver down, from cleavage to navel. Seconds become minutes, as the song caresses me. Oh, how I love him, this long tall drink of water with his huge hands and slow drawl. As the last note hangs in echo, I hear him approach. He lifts me high and traces the droplet down to the top of my hip-huggers with his tongue. I am still blindfolded when he places me on the ground. I feel his breathe upon my mouth. The tip of his tongue plays across my teeth. Ah, I remember him, his face, his hands, his taste, and that night at the empty skating rink…but, sadly, not his name. 

the scarf 
falls from my hands --
 the drawer closes

Date: 2/18/13

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  1. Date: 4/18/2013 8:06:00 AM

    Very compassionate, intense and sensual. I like the way you split your work with two prose and two haikus. I enjoyed reading it a lot.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:15:00 PM

    NICE WIN.....PD

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 1:00:00 PM

    ((())) Congrats on your winning romantic work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 6:40:00 AM

    Congrats on you win oh cool one, another steamy one from you lol xx

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:08:00 PM

    great write and win ....congrats

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 3:32:00 PM

    WoW!!To my Favs ;)...Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:12:00 AM

    So glad it titilated you LOL, yes maybe I should just do that!! XXXOO

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 9:05:00 AM

    This won hands down..........I wanted it to go on and on!!! Congrats!!!!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 8:05:00 AM

    Sheesh, I was breaking out in a sweat! ..Wow, congrats Deb..you could make a fortune writing this kind of great sensual stuff in book form. BG

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:43:00 AM

    Sensual, beautiful write !! Congrats on your win !

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:26:00 AM

    Congratulations Debbie

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:35:00 PM

    congrats Debbie on your 4th place win, the last stanza just grabbed me, lovely

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:29:00 PM

    Ah Springtime!! Very sensual and entrancing. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 5:09:00 AM

    My hearty congratulations on your fantastic win my dear friend, Deb! A great write indeed! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:48:00 AM

    Love the subdued sensuality of this poem, Debbie, Congrats on the win:) Jag

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:57:00 PM

    Debbie, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:47:00 PM

    Congrats Debbie on your winning this contest. (^_^)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 5:52:00 PM

    Wonderful haibun Deb! Very well done. Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's contest. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:21:00 AM

    "[...] this long tall drink of water with his huge hands and slow drawl." !! WOW! Ladies and gentlemen: a metaphor!! Steaming haibun, Deborah! Congratulations on your win! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:12:00 AM

    Captivating, and love the Haiku insertions (no pun) well maybe LOL Reminds me of a scene from a Rebecca De Mornay movie

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 3:36:00 PM

    Deb, what a sensational write! I adore it, thanks for sharing this lovely piece that brought me smiles today :)

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 2:51:00 PM

    Romance in the air ....wooooow.... love it, Debbie! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 11:52:00 PM

    AWEsome.... this is superb !!!! the wail of a harmonica -- moonlight serenade so romantic verses :) luv it so much ...<3 hugs and luv dear Debbie :) Suki

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:30:00 PM

    Sorry you got all I remember of him..oh he was a drama major..hmmm

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 3:03:00 PM

    we are talking Glenn Miller I'm assuming..........love that idea...humming in my head while reading the verse!

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 3:01:00 PM

    Whewwwww!!! I want to hear more!!!!!! Please don't stop now.....lol !!

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 10:35:00 PM

    ooh la la la , HOT one, Debs. Purrrr and an added meow!!!

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 7:00:00 PM

    Wow. I'm liking very. And that haiku sits there like a rock.

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/18/2013 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    now there's romance and it didn't cost him a dime LOL
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 5:21:00 PM

    the ending took me by surprise...great write..

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 5:14:00 PM

    Very nice, Debbie... THIS is sensual poetry, a little snapshot, leaving enough up to the imagination.. love it :)

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