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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:15:00 PM

    NICE WIN.....PD

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 1:00:00 PM

    ((())) Congrats on your winning romantic work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 6:40:00 AM

    Congrats on you win oh cool one, another steamy one from you lol xx

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:08:00 PM

    great write and win ....congrats

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 3:32:00 PM

    WoW!!To my Favs ;)...Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:12:00 AM

    So glad it titilated you LOL, yes maybe I should just do that!! XXXOO

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 9:05:00 AM

    This won hands down..........I wanted it to go on and on!!! Congrats!!!!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 8:05:00 AM

    Sheesh, I was breaking out in a sweat! ..Wow, congrats could make a fortune writing this kind of great sensual stuff in book form. BG

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:43:00 AM

    Sensual, beautiful write !! Congrats on your win !

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:26:00 AM

    Congratulations Debbie

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:35:00 PM

    congrats Debbie on your 4th place win, the last stanza just grabbed me, lovely

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:29:00 PM

    Ah Springtime!! Very sensual and entrancing. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 5:09:00 AM

    My hearty congratulations on your fantastic win my dear friend, Deb! A great write indeed! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:48:00 AM

    Love the subdued sensuality of this poem, Debbie, Congrats on the win:) Jag

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:57:00 PM

    Debbie, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:47:00 PM

    Congrats Debbie on your winning this contest. (^_^)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 5:52:00 PM

    Wonderful haibun Deb! Very well done. Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's contest. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:21:00 AM

    "[...] this long tall drink of water with his huge hands and slow drawl." !! WOW! Ladies and gentlemen: a metaphor!! Steaming haibun, Deborah! Congratulations on your win! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:12:00 AM

    Captivating, and love the Haiku insertions (no pun) well maybe LOL Reminds me of a scene from a Rebecca De Mornay movie

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 3:36:00 PM

    Deb, what a sensational write! I adore it, thanks for sharing this lovely piece that brought me smiles today :)

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 2:51:00 PM

    Romance in the air ....wooooow.... love it, Debbie! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 11:52:00 PM

    AWEsome.... this is superb !!!! the wail of a harmonica -- moonlight serenade so romantic verses :) luv it so much ...<3 hugs and luv dear Debbie :) Suki

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:30:00 PM

    Sorry you got all I remember of him..oh he was a drama major..hmmm

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 3:03:00 PM

    we are talking Glenn Miller I'm that idea...humming in my head while reading the verse!

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 3:01:00 PM

    Whewwwww!!! I want to hear more!!!!!! Please don't stop !!

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 10:35:00 PM

    ooh la la la , HOT one, Debs. Purrrr and an added meow!!!

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 7:00:00 PM

    Wow. I'm liking very. And that haiku sits there like a rock.

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/18/2013 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    now there's romance and it didn't cost him a dime LOL
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 5:21:00 PM

    the ending took me by surprise...great write..

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 4:29:00 PM

    Finally got some soup reading time and came over to see if there were any new Peruvian poems. Sheesh, now I have to go take a cold shower:-)

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 4:28:00 PM

    This is very titilating and still in very good taste. I was drawn into the story, well done Debbie. I really like this mixing of styles