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I said

I said on dawn 
“You appreared too fast “
not yet gone
my Tired of fatigue 
still nearby covered
Silence of nature sleep 
my niche terms myself
my ground
fighting dream

I said on day
“You lighted up my uplifting soul”
Accompanied me
with your rainbow
plumbed nature
Pursued questions
looking for answer

I said on night 
“you came before me”
but truly your face 
touched me much
stars
moon
what a beauty 
to seduce dazzle 
shall not go 
before my satisfaction

my dawn
my day
my night
satisfied 
don't you leave me
without a conclusion

hear I said
on your eternity
would like to pursue my fish swim
would like to kiss my Rainbow 
would like you to hear
I said

~c)Sukmawati komala ~ 18 February 2013~

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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 10:00:00 AM
    I liked this...it is very pure and beautiful. I enjoyed it, my friend...Thanks for your comments...xx Holly Moore