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BIDALSANA

I arch my back into prim sunlight, but last night
still has me where it wants it, a similar position, 
mewling, while the radio plays hard with the blues.

You purr/loined my adulation, me, your feel/line,
then sensibly took your time, pusssyfooting around
sensitive areas, so attentively, making me purr/spire. 

This yoga mat, this lone hour, holds no true purr/pose
Not yet. Slow moon, come. Make me again his pet,
fed and pampered, taking more than my share of him.

I rock little boat, try to blur the poetry that now lies
purr/pen/dickular in a seduced mind, a kitty, cornered,
won over by a soft touch that will ever purr/suede. 




*Bidalsana is a yoga position commonly known as the cat pose. 

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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 5:59:00 AM

    Interesting work..If for a contest, sure to make it into the winners' list..Enjoyed reading this morn..I would have to look up the Yoga position..Thanks for the high placement in the contest..I appreciate you reading and honoring my poem by placing it there..Sara

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 10:12:00 AM

    I'm not at all familiar with yoga positions. Nice poetic way to describe this position.

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 5:49:00 PM

    Wow! I didnt know TPS features the "best" of each form. I think TPS highlights the poems which have been chosen as fav. Rain and Stars, Iguazu Falls, Reflections, and Facedown... are mine. .............and a revised pro-love-to-Cyndi version of How to Haiku! : ) Thanks for the head up.

    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 2/19/2013 5:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The funny thing is...they're not haiku! LOL!
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 3:00:00 PM

    Another of yours, that shows why I think you are top-notch.....always extraordinary!

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 2:47:00 PM

    A fine write!I loved the creative use of your words fav verse 3. So glad to have a minute to read your work today. Not sure if these verses are in the best order for understanding? [just a thought 3,4,1,2] Light & Love