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About This Poem

May I ask you

Why should I make love new
And toil over its expression
When just a glance from you 
Boasts not a syllable 
But speaks perfection? 



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  1. Date: 2/21/2013 1:50:00 PM

    Lovely thoughts penned here

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 1:46:00 AM

    Jeremy good content, if I could suggest with very little reworking you would have a great tanka here, just a thought...David

    Martin Avatar Jeremy Martin Date: 2/18/2013 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, David, and thanks for stopping by.