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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 1:30:00 PM

    This is so cool and different! That has happened to me before only I was trying to write a book... but to be honest I had no idea where the story was going, still it was sad to see it go... But you right in the sense that words are just the reflections of thoughts and feelings inside you... the fact you didn't write it down doesn't mean it's not still there...

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 11:24:00 AM

    I don't think that I have come across your poetry on the Soup yet? Well, now you will probably always keep hard-copies of your work. I hope you at least came close to the original piece, with this rendition here, which is filled with calm, meditative imagery. Well done!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:42:00 PM

    oh DANG it, I would hate for that to happen to me. NEVER post something here without first making a hard copy. I print out everything I do immediately,Jeremy. You know what ? I saw that cute little poem of yours and this new one is pretty much just as good. It totally describes the scene the way I remember you said it!!

    Martin Avatar Jeremy Martin Date: 2/17/2013 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the advice, I certainly follow it. I don't think I could handle that happening again.
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:26:00 PM

    I'm sorry for your loss. I'm sure the "Shore Birds" will come back to you or maybe something better. Nice write.

    Martin Avatar Jeremy Martin Date: 2/17/2013 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Robert, that's really kind of you to say. Thanks for reading.