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Dancing in Dark Caves

You will not find me in darkness or harsh spoken words intemperate you will not find me in neglect but in soft spoken words lovingly tendered. I live in a field of passion somewhere behind green eyes a field fragrant with blossoms that my senses cannot deny. I lie in shadows of moonlight pearl essence on milky white skin and sometimes I lie in open fields dancing with love imagined and then spoils my soul with morning bees tenderly upon each bloom the sun rises to it's nadir and my flesh is mightily consumed. I dance in dark caves scarves magenta in pale moonlight bangles on my wrist and ankles dancing for my life. Dancing for the future. Dancing for all I dream, and in my dreams... I dance.

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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 3:21:00 PM

    Words cannot describe the beauty of this one. I am in awe. This is superbly written with beautiful imagery

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:15:00 AM

    So beautiful, Catie

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:10:00 PM

    You led me through your dream,beautifully.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:09:00 AM

    So many thougts expressed with so few words. This is really good. It took my mind to a place it has never been.

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 11:53:00 AM

    Powerful...it left me feeling in control of the dream! I loved every word of this!

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:11:00 AM

    Definitely a favourite..What a beauty

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 11:05:00 AM

    Also into my favs--Hugs

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:23:00 AM

    Very dreamy and wondrfully, I could picture from the beginning, a gypsy fire, a beautiful Gypsy girl, the fragrance of a romantic night with one you might have loved but your paths never cross. Because, I think, I have never known of a green eyed gypsy girl? Or a green eyed Gypsy boy. What attracted me to this poem is the title, I have this terrible fear of being in a cave, underground and then an earthquake? But my curiosity for your poem was streonger. I like this poem a lot. Ronnie

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 1:45:00 PM

    Boy, am I glad I came to visit today---I'll start by dittoing Franks comment and add that this is the best poem I've read in a while---beautiful Catie. ( BTW is dottoing a word??--well it is now LOL everything starts somewhere!!) Luv Ya

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:10:00 AM

    Great!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 11:58:00 AM

    NOBODY....WRITES POETRY Like you. Takes my breath away....gotta go to soupmail...with what i have left t osay...

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 8:43:00 AM

    Again........amazingly fluid with beautiful descriptions. Gorgeous!

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 8:25:00 PM

    Quite poeticly said

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 9:02:00 PM

    this is gorgeous, CAtie. You are at top form!! I saw the poem Frank did for you. you deserve a poem like that!!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 11:42:00 AM

    I Love It!! Imagery at it's best-=Lovely Picture

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 11:22:00 AM

    Catie an excellent write, the eyes just dance over the lines...David

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 11:09:00 AM

    Just stopping by to say hi! Have a great day! JP