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THE LAST PEEP

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THE LAST PEEP

THE LAST PEEP


The dawn knocked at the night’s door
That was sleeping on the time’s floor
Sunrays rushed in, starting to play
Night out went, in came the day

Stars, at once, vanished from sky 
As the sun proudly climbed up high
Over the clear skies rode with glee
His likeness upon the waters trying to see

I observed him gallop from East to West
When his work was done, he wanted to rest
Kissed the day goodnight, all set ready to sleep
But before going down HE had a very last PEEP!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
   17 February 2013 

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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 10:10:00 PM
    This is adorable!!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:17:00 PM
    A poem, about night and day. It is briliant how the sun says good night and takes a last peep. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/18/2013 4:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you LUCILLA!
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 6:57:00 PM
    Very nicely done Demetrios, seems we find ourselves having that last peep too. Watching the very last gold slip away....

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/18/2013 4:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is so nice of you!
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:35:00 AM
    You done did it again my friend... another keeper! BRILLIANT! Cheers from Canada!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/17/2013 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So you have lived in Montreal? La ville que j'aime! Fantastique mon ami! Merci! Thank you!
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 3:32:00 AM
    Very nice. I love poems of nature. especially ones that involve the suns journey across the sky. This was quite enjoyable. I don't mean to toot my own horn but I have a few if you would like to read. They are, "The Crimson Lips Of Dawn" and "The Passing Of A Day". Thanks for sharing. Rockman :-)

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/17/2013 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rockman for your kind words! Certainly I will have a look!
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 3:15:00 AM
    a beautiful write , thanks for sharing ...thank you for the kind visits at my page....

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/17/2013 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, You are welcome!
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 2:08:00 AM
    I was enchanted by this, Demetrios. Great write from one of my favorite poets!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/17/2013 11:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much! You are so kind!