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Haiku 12

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Haiku 12

Join one another 
in a zone deeper than breath.  
Essential moment.

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:44:00 PM

    more imagery with breath. It works very well with the essential moment.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/27/2013 5:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I took a writing class with a poet who emphasized literal breath. I enjoy it as a very soft action word. J
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:46:00 PM

    I remember those moments...they are indeed essential.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/19/2013 6:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, they are. Thanks for reading it and commenting. J
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:27:00 PM

    Just beautiful...Charma

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/17/2013 8:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the nice comment. J