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Trilogy

Stars Destined Things wished forgotten have found beginnings to a conquering love dream... Awake Facing darkness - I moved through. Finding love and freedom in my mind... Dream Fantasies Inocent kisses, found charm and desire, that sparkle an illusion of love...
02/16/2013 Written By Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: About these poems, they were compose by a bunch of words that were all mixed up. We had to compose a poem with 20 words or less. This what I came up with. I hope you like them.

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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 4:37:00 AM

    Dear Lucilla, Impressive! Excellent!Marvelous!

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo Date: 2/18/2013 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am glad you think so. It makes me feel good.
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:23:00 PM

    You met the challenge and then some...wonderful

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo Date: 2/18/2013 10:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much.
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:26:00 PM

    wow, you did an amazing job with such a challenge. You ended up with something quite lovely!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 10:33:00 AM

    yes they are wonderful

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo Date: 2/17/2013 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry. We used to call these PIMS, I don't know what they would be called in this site.
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:40:00 PM

    Well done a lovely read.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:59:00 PM

    Yes, I love them Lucilla ! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo Date: 2/17/2013 10:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne Lise.
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:17:00 PM

    Lucilla, I really enjoyed your lovely poem today. Wishing you a blessed weekend luv, Love always, Gail

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo Date: 2/17/2013 10:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much.