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Seeded Pain

This is far more greater a pain that was ever needed ,
The damage done long ago when it was seeded.
    This hurt you planted deep within me ,
Has grown to a  size that just shouldnt be .
     Disrespect and neglect it means nothing to you,
For it is something you just will always do.
     Love doesn't hurt like this it never  could ,
The words mean nothing to you but they should .
    Compassion and understanding is what love takes ,
If you want to live a love without heartbreaks.
    Talking and listening go hand in hand ,
To love in this life as a woman and a man.
     Im so devistated by the events of these days ,
Not able to to get you to ever  change your ways.
     How can I convince you that it is all a mistake,
And the pain and hurt  I can no longer take .
     Makes me never  wanting to awaken again,
No matter  even if it's  Gods  greatest sins .
TAC 


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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 8:53:00 PM

    Congrats on your Honorable Mention, Timothy! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:10:00 AM

    Hi congratulations Timothy, this is a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 8:46:00 PM

    TIMOTHY, , your poem is amazing, love your thoughts on the topic "SEEDS" for this contest... goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 8:19:00 PM

    congrats' SandyIvy