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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 4:27:00 PM

    Congratulations on a very fine win, Yasmin!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 6:31:00 PM wish I had time to keep up with every body every day. There just are not enough hours in the day but this is wonderful...Donna

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:19:00 AM

    Congrad's on your win. Excellent vocabulary too! So nice to read a new form. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:31:00 PM

    YASMIN, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:36:00 PM

    Beautiful Yasmin, you're rockin' !

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:20:00 AM

    a very lovely write my friend Yasmin :) Congratulations on your win in andrea's Contest. cheers!! Love, Maria

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:46:00 AM

    Mandy congrats Yasmin this is another souper verse fro you , you just keep them coming xx

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:28:00 AM

    Yas, congrats on your win, beautiful...David

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 6:46:00 AM

    Yasmin congrats on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 4:39:00 AM

    Congratulations Yasmin on your win!Loved this one on my first read.

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:57:00 PM

    This was gorgeous, lovely lady!! Congrats on my contest.

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 11:27:00 PM

    Another fine piece of poetry my friend.

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 6:23:00 PM

    Me too Yasmin..everyone seems like a promise somehow...beautiful

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 3:26:00 PM

    Sometimes I wonder if stars are souls Yasmin - if so, what happens when they burst - its very good to be thankful - 'blazing to shine...' is a great thought - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 5:24:00 PM

    Beautiful, Yasmin. They do shine so brightly. Yes, He sure thinks of everything. Sweet dream!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 11:31:00 AM

    The stars are looking back at you and in their eyes I see your beauty reflected! Excellent!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:22:00 AM

    A passionate dreamy verse, my dear Yasmin! Loved this one... will place it among my favourites! Hugs!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 6:18:00 AM

    Well done Yasmin!A beautiful poem on this rather challenging form.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:14:00 AM

    As lovely as you dear shine like the stars here on soup. loved the Sestina.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 7:09:00 AM

    This is a brilliant write, a simply wondrous write my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this evening! You have captured the beauty of the stars within this awesome piece, What a spectacular poem, Greats Work!!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:27:00 AM

    Yasmin, this is a beautiful Sestina, well done, Constance

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:59:00 AM

    Sequined bright, that's my picture of the night.