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About This Poem

a bird flies over

a bird flies over
sings a beautiful song…
springtime evolves


Russell Sivey

Entrant into Poet Destroyer A's "Your own favorite haiku." contest

2/15/2013

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    Raul Moreno
    Date: 3/9/2013 9:36:00 PM
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    Enjoyed the use of imagery, I can't wait for the Spring
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    Donna Jones
    Date: 2/26/2013 4:54:00 PM
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    Congrats...
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 2/22/2013 9:13:00 PM
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    Great haiku, Russell! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/22/2013 6:22:00 PM
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    Yayyy Russell. Congrats to you.
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 2/22/2013 9:18:00 AM
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    So cheery and hopeful! Congrats Russell!
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 2/22/2013 9:12:00 AM
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    This is an amazing haiku my dear friend, Russell! I extremely love it and the very wonderful image and great feelings it gives! My biggest hearty congratulations on your super win! love and hugs, Leonora
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/22/2013 1:23:00 AM
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    Hi congratulations, great haiku Russell, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 2/21/2013 7:11:00 PM
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    Congrats. On your 1st place win, Amazing beauty spreads like eagle wings over high altitude it's next to amazing, enjoy the glory my friend, you well deserve this xxx
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    Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/21/2013 7:02:00 PM
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    Congrats Russell...Seren
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/21/2013 6:21:00 PM
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    way to go Russell! 1st place
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/21/2013 6:04:00 PM
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    HELLO RUSSELL, now this is my favorite haiku... good choice... xox~PD
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    Betty Bolden
    Date: 2/17/2013 3:03:00 AM
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    very nice
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    Joy Wellington
    Date: 2/16/2013 11:28:00 PM
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    Thanks for this beautiful scenery...I could be sitting under the shade of a tree taking it all in. Lovely! Appreciate your visit and comments. One love. Joy Wells
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/16/2013 8:19:00 PM
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    I sure like that line: springtime evolves. I am really hoping to see an early evolution this year!!
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 2/16/2013 11:15:00 AM
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    If it's OK for me to help you here in commnets let me know, I am glad to see you trying! [ think suject line 1/ action line 2- an extra bit of sensory info which could have happned in the same 'snapshot or haiiku moment] so 1 subject 1 action ;) Light & Love
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 2/16/2013 11:07:00 AM
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    Russell, what an image...what a beautiful picture springs to mind as I read this haiku...thank you for your comment on my sestina...your opinion always matters and I would like it if yiu showed me any mistakes I have made in my poetry..
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/16/2013 8:02:00 AM
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    You make it look easy
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    Constance La France
    Date: 2/16/2013 5:39:00 AM
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    Russell, this haiku is so lovely, I just love it, Constance
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    HOLLY MOORE
    Date: 2/16/2013 5:33:00 AM
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    This just flows beautifully..good luck in the contest and thanks for your comments! xxoo Holly Moore
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    Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/16/2013 4:00:00 AM
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    Laconic poetry crowned by beauty! Thank you! High marks!


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