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haiku 35

a rainbow 
glitters around a full moon --
black ice

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  1. Date: 3/9/2013 7:10:00 PM

    I've always thought that ring around the moon somewhat of a quandary. A "nighttime rainbow" is really a lovely thought... and that black ice paints a nice picture of a very cold, very black night. This is the true essence of haiku as the old Japanese masters would be proud of.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:54:00 PM

    I can really see the sparkling colors. Great job, Debbie, and thanks for your help, again.

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:43:00 AM

    Nice imagery...

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 11:42:00 AM

    Such a cool haiku, Debbie.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:13:00 PM

    love this Debbie,, reminds me of my father(Farmer folklore) a ring around the moon, an eye on the sheep because of snow...yes lovely and clever poetry...

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 8:44:00 AM

    A divine haiku! Cynthia

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 6:57:00 AM

    Nice.Change the title to Haiku 35 :-)

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:46:00 AM

    Debbie, a very descriptive haiku, well done, constance

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:51:00 AM

    niceeee

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 11:59:00 PM

    oooh, ME LIKES