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Sailing Away

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Sailing Away

Were I a sailboat traveling at sea 
All alone with no one but me 
My masts would creak , the decks rock gently beneath my feet 
The hiss of my bow slice thru the waves ,
the tang of the ocean spray as I watch the wake paving the way
 Billowing white sails puffed out in  the summer breeze
And onward I would go merrily out to sea
No use for the land , just wild and free

The dolphins would come and play
The seaweed hang out all day 
Overhead the sky prefers  blue , but sometimes grey 
nothing but me , the sun and the summer rain
The reflections play across the water
The waves lap gently on my bow
No use for the land , just me here and now

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  1. Date: 7/13/2013 2:55:00 PM

    hello, Jim, stopping by this one again. praising the peace and the tranquil feeling of who you choose to be. if ever one say....I wish to sail in this form tooooo... love. ..linda

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 3:47:00 PM

    To be that free would be awesome Jim . Very well written. Anne

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 1:37:00 PM

    Wow, really descriptive! I can practically feel like I'm at the ocean as I read this. Wonderful poetry! :D

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:15:00 PM

    wow Jim this is so visual,,amazing poetry..

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 12:02:00 AM

    this is a sublime picture and I love the dolphins added in!

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 8:55:00 PM

    Hello Jim, your poem is wonderful...pd

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 6:04:00 PM

    Beautiful there's nothing like the open sea! Nice read.