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Watching You Sleep

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Watching You Sleep

Who's still dreaming?
Believe me when I say the gleam in your eyes is my morning sunrise...
Shadows subside down your peaks and valleys 
as I watch pure beauty come into my life.
I've been watching you for hours to see my sunrise, 
so please wake up and open them eyes.

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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:27:00 PM

    Ele , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 1:58:00 PM

    Nice read, dear! keep the ink flowing

    Ven Avatar Ele Ven Date: 2/15/2013 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Ingibo :)
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 1:54:00 PM

    A lovely small poem, Ele. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Hope you will get much pleasure sharing your poems and thoughts here with us. - Good luck. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Ven Avatar Ele Ven Date: 2/15/2013 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne. Sharing my writings for the first time in my life. Quite a vulnerable experience but feels beautiful. Have a great weekend :) Ele