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Haiku 11

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Haiku 11

	
	
	
	sweet and persistent
	river of skin across bone
	wrestling in the night
			
	
	


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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:45:00 PM
    excellent imagery within this one.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 2/27/2013 5:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks!
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:48:00 PM
    Now there is a thought and image to see. Remembered and missed....this is more of a sighhhh moment for self. But I can remember the ahhhh YES moments.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 2/19/2013 6:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes... Me too. J
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 6:28:00 AM
    I love this haiku too

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 2/18/2013 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again for reading my poems. J
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 8:32:00 PM
    Hello Jack, a very exciting haiku..pd

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 2/15/2013 9:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! I enjoy inventing them. J
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 12:41:00 PM
    - Beautiful written, Jack. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 2/15/2013 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, and a fine weekend for you too. J
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 12:22:00 PM
    jack very good...David

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 2/15/2013 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. I appreciate the comment. J
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 12:06:00 PM
    I like this one Jack... very original

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 2/15/2013 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. I enjoy the form. In some ways they seem to write themselves. Perhaps it's the compression of language. J