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Cottage in the Wood - SF

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Cottage in the Wood - SF

Arms crossed, pacing back and forth
poking and prying in every corner
peering in closets, turning on faucets
humming softly and talking to yourself
You glanced back at me and smiled 
knowing you had found our place
our place to grow old together
our cottage in the wood

I live in our cottage in the wood
I live in our cottage alone

Look at it now
Look at this place
Look what has become of it
Look what has become of me

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  1. Date: 11/21/2013 12:49:00 PM

    Way to go..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:07:00 PM

    Tim, , Awesome free verse win.. xox~ Linda,

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:19:00 AM

    Such a melancholy feel to this one. Captivated me. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 12:15:00 AM

    lovely meditative feel you created, tim.. congrats to you!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 8:11:00 PM

    I am moved by this piece. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 6:29:00 PM

    Tim, it is so fascinating to come and see who has written these poems!!! I am seeing a comment I made to you a long time ago on this one. My memory sure is bad because I completely forgot you wrote this. Congrats in my contest. If it had had more imagery, it would have soared to the top!!!

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 6:34:00 PM

    Congrats on your win sir. AO

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 2:25:00 PM

    Oh Tim...makes me sad...but very descriptive poem...congratulations...

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 8:16:00 AM

    Tim--this one rocks! A great description!

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:40:00 PM

    [I think you are f I n e...Cher]Congrad's on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 2:06:00 PM

    congrats on your win Tim

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 1:31:00 PM

    - Thanks for letting me visit your home - Congratulations on your win in the contest: "A Home" - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 1:28:00 PM

    My big hearty congratulations my dear friend , Tim for your win and your very beautiful poem. I love it so much and I’ve extremely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for your full support! Love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 3:46:00 PM

    Sorry Tim that your heart has been broken also....Seren

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 2:59:00 PM

    wow, tim, this one for some reason is the most effective of the heartbreak poems I am reading today. I think for the way you ended it. The stark contrast in what you are saying. Awesome, and congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 10:31:00 AM

    I've been thru this, not fun...congrats on this touching winning entry Tim ...Donna

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 9:19:00 AM

    Congrats, Tim. Excellent. Happy Easter. Ralph

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:09:00 PM

    Tim, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 10:35:00 AM

    I have come back to this poem, Tim...for it speaks to me......only this time through the eyes of my daughter who lost her young husband in November. There are reminders everywhere she goes....it is if you wrote it for her too. I know I commented before...but I'm drawn back to how it must feel. Thanks again for sharing.

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:10:00 PM

    Oh goodness, you go find yourself a great lady, now I know you can, someone as charming as you! BIG BIG HUGS! Light & Love [It is a great write though to bad we have to go through this stuff..to get one aye?]

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 11:36:00 AM

    A pity you got to experience it alone. I love this write even though it is a little sad Tim. How are you doing? Havent heard drom you in a while ;) tc Wilma

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 9:47:00 AM

    This is very interesting...sort of like a slap in the face toward the end...strong. I like it!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 12:04:00 AM

    awesome write,,, a little sad though.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:51:00 AM

    You're very good at making us feel things... Such a sad commentary on how things go in so many lives... you touched us.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 8:12:00 PM

    Tim, hello :-) :-), wow... I don't like the sad feeling of this poem. However, i love the poem. I wish I lived across this cottage. hope it's only a poem... or should i say... Irmycorn to the rescue xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 2:17:00 PM

    Well written but heartfelt Tim. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 12:11:00 PM

    Tim, a sad but wonderful picture, I like your comment on mine...David

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:44:00 AM

    A tearjerker indeed Tim and a beautifully crafted poem as well. Thanks for commenting on my poetry. Have a wonderful weekend!! Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:06:00 AM

    Oh wow, Tim, this puts my heart into a knot, so painful to read. The loss is more unbearable when surrounded by reminders of "what might have been"... I feel this one deeply.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:03:00 AM

    Tim, this is heartbreaking. Becca is right. You are so good at tugging at those darn heartstrings. Faving this one.