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IF I WERE ASKED

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IF I WERE ASKED

IF I WERE ASKED


If
I were asked
My dear,
What in you I would like
To change,
My answer, emphatically,
NOTHING, would be, 
Unchanged, I wish you 
To remain,

FOR

How could I dare
Interfere, 
With your splendid being 
In any way, 
When 
The Lord, in HIS wisdom
Has, you my love,
So 
Perfectly MADE?



©Demetrios Trifiatis
  15 February 2013



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  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:35:00 PM
    Perfectly said....blessings

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/18/2013 3:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Donna, you always generous!
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:13:00 PM
    I love this one Demetrios. You have said a great deal with an economy of words. I am sure your perfect one appreciated this splendid poem.

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/18/2013 3:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Laconic wisdom was I taught by my forfathers. Ha-ha! Merci Richard!
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 10:27:00 AM
    A love poem to surpass all love poems! As Eileen said, a 10 out of 7!!! Cheers, Jack

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/15/2013 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my fiend! May I write to ask you for some clarifications concerning the PS?
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 5:50:00 AM
    I have no words to describe the beauty of this poem! For once, I'm speechless!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/15/2013 6:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Very kind and very generous!! We are always inspired by situations and people around us. Thank you!
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 2/15/2013 5:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A 7 for I cannot give a 10.
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 5:34:00 AM
    As always, beautiful poetry. God don't make mistakes. Have a wonderful weekend. Lucilla

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/15/2013 6:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Lucilla, Yes, the LORD is perfect, any mistakes seen comes from our ignorance! Thank you!
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 5:03:00 AM
    This is truly Beautiful a grand tribute to Love! Lori

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/15/2013 6:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lori, may God bless you with such love!
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:22:00 AM
    - Just: - - GORGEOUS!!!!!! - - <3 - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/15/2013 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Anne Lise, You GORGEOUS!!! Have a marvelous weekend too!
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 3:33:00 AM
    True my dear Sir..fearfully and wonderfully made in the perfection of God's image...awesome piece you've penned there..anyone can relate to it..thanks :-)

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 2/15/2013 1:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sir, Yes, what we are is God's doing and that's perfect!