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Below is the poem entitled Lost which was written by poet SHAH JEHAN ASHRAFI. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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The scorching sun was laughing
Blisters of my feet were crying
My heart sweated with fear
By my side was no one dear
Tears in my eyes were stout
I could not find my way out
I was lost in the dry desert
Emotions poured out of my heart
I kept wandering like a bee
Then suddenly that light hit me
I stepped forward unto its core
It emanated more and more
I strived to reach its source
I hastened like a restless horse
And I lost myself to a new force...

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  1. Date: 10/24/2013 8:42:00 AM
    Such strong emotion from nature that can be so beautiful yet so cruel; very nice writing.

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 6:32:00 AM
    enjoyed that SJA...Seren

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 8:31:00 AM
    Well done, I enjoyed this emotion filled poem. Welcome to the soup.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 10:47:00 AM
    like this Shah, enjoyed your poetry...

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 10:11:00 PM
    May the force be with you.