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Cinderella

She only has a few teeth 
Left in her mouth although
The most wonderful of warm smiles 
Eyes and humble kindness
A soul sincere as grateful; love...
Once she was a beautiful princess
Until life these drugs stole her crown
Now unto the bible her heart, she holds close.

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 11:48:00 PM

    awwe so sweet..thank you dear Rachel..for stopping by and always supports me and others with your kindness and love..you are my Fav Poet ever :) <3 <3 <3 luv and hugs :) Sk

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:51:00 PM

    My favorite poem of yours Rachel because you still see beauty....always.....donna

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:22:00 PM

    Intresting and powerful twist on an old tale. Well done.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 1:24:00 PM

    Rich or poor, beautiful or not, drugs run through everyone's veins the same. Enjoyed reading your written words my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 8:47:00 AM

    Sad to see what illegal drugs and sometimes legal ones can do to a person in just a short time..Enjoyed reading your emotive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:36:00 PM

    So tragicly true.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:15:00 PM

    A very touching story Rachel, love xxx