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our first Valentines

I opened up my box of chocolates,
I could tell you that dropped them
you handed me my flowers
that got crushed by your hands
and my ear rings didn't fit just right
your work called you into tonight 
   but that's okay, I wouldn't want it
any other way, to tell you the truth
I like to watch you stumble, 
but I don't want you to fall
  You forgot to wear the watch that I
just bought you, and when you woke up
all you did was want to fight too.
But that's okay I wouldn't want it any other way.
    I like to watch you stumble in your over sized shoes
knowing that you try so hard to impress me with everything you do.
but you don't have to, all I want, all I need is you.


        So I tossed out the chocolates
and threw the flowers on the bed, I put in my ear rings and this is what I said.
"I like to watch you stumble, but never see you fall, I like to watch you wake up
and yell than not see you at all, I wouldn't have it any other way. Happy Valentines Day."

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 5:14:00 PM

    Congrats, Nichole. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 5:11:00 AM

    - A very sweet Valentine's poem, it had to win! - CONGRATULATIONS, NICHOLE !! - Have a beautiful Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 10:55:00 PM

    Congratulations my dear Nichole for your very lovely write and fantastic win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:59:00 PM

    congrats on a fine win

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:32:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:27:00 PM

    Congratulations on your fine win, Nichole!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 2:15:00 PM

    Nichole, CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and wonderful poem. always & forever *LINDA