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Love's Presence Last

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way.. ..way back then.. ...years ago that day... ...we met you said there goes my future wife I was in the dark, I did not know you A stranger .......you.......were to me your sister...............talked to me you came by............sat with me love began.....it grew years have gone by love's presence last

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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 9:30:00 AM

    So sweet. Love the shape. Enjoyed, Sara!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 5:45:00 PM

    Very lovely....blessings to you both

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:45:00 PM

    You are a fortunate woman--of course it is by your own making. I love how you added some shape to this for this special day. It took me a while to get here, but I made it.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:29:00 PM

    And yet it seems like only yesterday, doesn't it?...Lovely piece of work, Sarah...Love how you use dots and spaces to convey the passage of time...Hope your special Valentine read this too - Tim

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 7:26:00 AM

    Aw Sara, what a sweet poem and I love how you formatted it :D

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 7:02:00 AM

    Beautiful shape, beautiful poetry and most beautiful love!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 6:38:00 AM

    ....................................... ‡ What A Joy It Was In Finding Your Priceless Beauty's Kind Visit, Sweet Beautiful Sara! ˜ And Still I Find This Beautiful Treasure Of Love, Brushed In Magical Splendours Divine, A Light A Crown, Atop Your Beauty's Poetic Pedestal ˜ Thank You Sooo Much For Your Kind Warm Visit; Sooo Wonderful! ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:08:00 AM

    Way way back, how rich are these words?

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:38:00 AM

    VERY NICE

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 12:50:00 PM

    Wonderful story, I am glad you know true love. So much better than the temporary love that seems so common these days.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:27:00 AM

    That was so nicely done...with a wonderful story, too.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 5:21:00 AM

    So sweet Sara.... Hope you had a romantic Valentine's day. - - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 5:09:00 AM

    Awesome write enjoyed reading your poem today! Lori

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 12:58:00 AM

    Beautiful piece.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:50:00 PM

    I enjoyed seeing this little poem of your love life, Sara. I hope it was a special valentines day today as well.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:30:00 PM

    Nicely done, Sara! You did great with the heart shape. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:56:00 PM

    I am glad to have the love of my life here with me today! I just know it will last! This is a fantastic write that talks about this lasting love! I enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening, full of romance tonight! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 3:54:00 PM

    wonderful romantic write! Lori

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 3:01:00 PM

    Sara I love this very romantic write...David

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 2:52:00 PM

    ......................... ‡ Ps., I Am Going To Favour This Beautiful Love Story. *

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 2:47:00 PM

    ‡ I Love The Way Your Beauty's Last Word Captures One's Breath, Sweet Beautiful Sara! ˜ 'You Said There Goes My Future Wife,' I Love That And Can Merely Imagine How Joyful Yet Perhaps Anxious His Heart Must Have Been ? Although Years Have Since Passed And There You Are, Two Turtledoves, Still Madly In Love ˜ 'Beautiful!' ˜ Happy Valentines Day, Beautiful Sara ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *