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Death Came Calling

On this stormy night I pray 
Let my sins be washed away
The clouds are thick 
Not a star in sight
On this cold and stormy night
A stain on my pillow 
Where tears fell like rain
No more sorrow
No more pain
A dark figure beckons me to come
Whispering that this life is done
No more sorrow 
No more pain 
For I shall perish in the rain
Lured into the darkness
Searching for the light
On this cold and stormy night

 
 

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  1. Date: 4/18/2013 11:07:00 AM

    These kind of poems are what pours out of me sometimes Lori, so i can relate very well, nicely done my friend, Blessings, Carl

    Hopkins Avatar Lori Hopkins Date: 4/30/2013 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. I have enjoyed your too.
  1. Date: 4/13/2013 2:40:00 PM

    One of the best poems i have read, it is sad, fear, but i pray you love life again, as i tell myself everyday that life is beautiful. Its makes feel content with what i have. A 7 <<< Love Terry xoxo

    Hopkins Avatar Lori Hopkins Date: 4/30/2013 8:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you though I have read other people's poems and wished I could write like them, including yours! You write from ther heart. Thanks again for the compliment and I'll be reading more of yours. <3
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 7:52:00 PM

    I remember feeling like this after watching a Walt Disney movie. Actually, I did cry. Everything looked so easy on the film, but it wasn't like that at all in real life. Not a fairy tale at all.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 6:35:00 AM

    awsum poem!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 7:13:00 PM

    !!!

    Hopkins Avatar Lori Hopkins Date: 2/15/2013 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 12:59:00 PM

    ‡ Your Beauty Makes Me Smile, Sweet Beautiful Lori! ˜ Your Rhyme Is Tamed In Wonderful, Wherein Also One Can Tell That A Darkened Figure Holds No Sway Nor Chains Unto Your Everlasting Beautiful Heart ˜ I Love This Wind Swept Night As The Drizzling Drops Do Glitter In Moonbeams Whom, Claim Your Light Their Own ˜ Happy Valentines Day ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Hopkins Avatar Lori Hopkins Date: 2/14/2013 1:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. I love your very poetic comments. Off to read yours. <3