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VALENTINE PACKAGE

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VALENTINE PACKAGE

VALENTINE PACKAGE

Plea.

in this deep freeze, dear
this cold region – michigan
i must make it clear
limbs are frozen all the time
please melt the ice, valentine

Forever Yours – plus that old time candy

i’m yours forever
struck with love like a dumb ox
cannot be clever
no sweet candy in a box
can top my love forever

Lost Valentine

the wind is howling
rain pings against my window
i’m feeling so low
part the clouds dear valentine
let in your ray of sunshine



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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:31:00 AM
    Cleverly done! A unique approach to celebrating Valentine's Day. Well done, my friend!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:10:00 PM
    Ahhh!! I just enjoyed this one..I hear that Michigan is a cold state with lots of snow and ice?...I hope that today found you warming by the fire with a cup of Hot Chocolate and Marshmallows..Thanks for stopping by with your uplifting review..Sara

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 5:31:00 PM
    and loving THIS set again too.

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 7:11:00 AM
    Daver - I love the plea - did the clouds part. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 10:24:00 PM
    these are excellent Valentine packages for us in the winter months. Melt the ice and part those clouds, DAVER!!!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:27:00 PM
    Love the rays, that brighten my day every day... Daver...hope you are well...pd

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 3:19:00 PM
    Well, I like this little valentine card ;} Happy Valentine's day for you from ME ;} Thank you for reading "The Wind is calling" I was around 17 then ;}

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 1:46:00 PM
    Aah.. yes the sunshine.." of love; true and life changing, brave enough for world re-arranging, is re-arranging the right description?? anyway hope it wins through Daver..!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 1:26:00 PM
    love these beautiful valentine's day tankas, Daver

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 10:41:00 AM
    A bit sad, but still lovely Daver. - Happy Valentine's day! - oxox / / Anne-L