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Haiku 10

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Haiku 10

Then we are in flames,
strung like pearls on a silk thread.
Wrestling in the night.

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  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:51:00 AM
    Wow, the imagery here is outstanding!! This is such a unique haiku - I love it. (And thank you for all of your kind comments! They are always appreciated!)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/6/2013 8:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comment. I enjoy haiku, especially the compression and abstraction. My comments on your writing are well-deserved. Jack
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:46:00 PM
    I see you used wrestling in the night again. this one I love the middle line!!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 2/27/2013 5:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I used the repeat because they seemed to relate to each other quite well. I probably should have made it a double as I did on 17. I just didn't think to do so. J
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Lovely, Jack! - Happy Valentine's day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 2/14/2013 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! And a happy day to you too. J