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Happy Valentines Day

                                                         I 
                                                     kneel
                                                here before you
                                           heart all a flutter
                                             would ask you myself
                                         I can’t with this stutter
                                                my heart is all yours
                                        If you want it, its true
                                                    no one else has
                                             ever claimed it
                                                       before you
                                                     Be mine
                                                        XX
              

                        Just like this diamond you are a jewel above the rest
                                          HAPPY VALENTINE’S DAY

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 12:21:00 PM
    Seren, I can see you did the shape correctly line wise--I was so frustrated at first, because I would do the shape on word then copy and paste to post a poem and NO--so I adjusted it again in the post area and submitted--it was still off--so I'd go to edit and adjust then update and it still looked not right until I had to make it a little off in the edit to get it right in the update---very frustrating!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/17/2013 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes Craig it takes a lot of fiddling. so annoying when its right and you copy it and whoosh its off sync. all trial and error craig
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:05:00 PM
    this is really sweet and I love that "shape!"

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/17/2013 2:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea....Seren
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:37:00 AM
    Beautiful...wonderfully put..thank you Seren :-)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/15/2013 3:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you....Seren
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 10:39:00 PM
    This is a jewel. And I do not studder.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/15/2013 3:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    awwww thanks for stopping by...Seren
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 10:09:00 PM
    Cutie Po. My imagination says the diamond is shimmering, hence the wee wave to the outline. :D I just penned a couplet for your contest... Shaft of Light, yours, right?... sigh... just missed it! oh well, I invite you to give it a read as you inspired it, hon, Title is Tomorrow's Rewards. Thanks for the inspiration all the same. All writes are worth the effort. Hugs, Cyndi

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/15/2013 3:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you must have a vivid imagination...Seren
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 12:50:00 PM
    Ahh! You put a smile on my face! I can't see the diamond! LOL! Dont listen to me...I just came to wish you a Happy Valentine Day!! Ruben.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/14/2013 7:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol ruben its a sort of round one done in a hurry for PD. thats my excuse.
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 10:03:00 AM
    Ok I will....ha ha ....David Re-send monkey please....

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/14/2013 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol have done so...Seren
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:10:00 AM
    This is a wonderful and sentimental write my friend! I loved reading this illustrious poem this morning! What a tremendous piece, surely a meaningful poem, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/14/2013 7:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Russell...Seren
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:04:00 AM
    I like the simplicity and shape of your poem.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/14/2013 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL P.D. wanted a quick entry for her contest, thats why i wrote in silly words... Thanks for stopping by...Seren