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His Tender Eyes

His eyes, so very intense they love to stare Deep and dark they do pierce through her tender soul His eyes cast a powerful wink, which has flair He puts her in a trance one she can’t control Color of his eyes is a beautiful brown His eyes burn in hers even when she looks down They have a glowing glare about them, tender No matter her place she feels his eyes on her
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 5:16:00 PM

    Very stirring on this v day

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 1:59:00 PM

    Ohh, so cute. I love it, Russell!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 1:39:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your very descriptive work..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are so uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 1:04:00 PM

    love this beautiful write, Russell

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 12:01:00 PM

    A wonderful poem for Valentine's Day my friend! Loved it/// Jack

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:07:00 AM

    Russell I love the power in this, well done...David

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:28:00 AM

    Russell words from the heart. Tenderly written. Happy Valentine's day my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:12:00 AM

    Russell, your poem stir deep memories within me... brown eyes... Enjoyed your write...

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:02:00 AM

    Another excellent piece of poetic expression! I like it a lot!Thank you for commenting: Being Greek I used the word Ambrosia for as you know it was the favorite drink of the Olympians. So I give a divine dimention in Love.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:49:00 AM

    A very lovely poem my dear friend, Russell! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a very happy Valentines Day to you and your love ones! Wish you all the best of love this Hearts Day and always! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:16:00 AM

    just beautiful..eyes are the mirror of the soul.I love how you ended the poem..Very classy indeed..Charma

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 7:58:00 AM

    Ahhhh...how simply lovely and full of tender sentiment !! Enjoyed !!